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Burns my Soul

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Here we go
Here we are
Are we here
Are we real
Real life happens
Real life burns
Burns take time to heal
Burns mark us all
All we want
All we know
Know my heart
Know my name
Name the place
Name the time
Time is up
Time runs out
Out we go
Out of place
Place your head
Place the light
Light the way
Light the path
Path not taken
Path not free
Free yourself
Free your mind
Mind the gap
Mind your manners
Manners make the man
Manners matter
Matter breaks down
Matter is energy
Energy in our blood
Energy in my hands
Hands on the wheel
Hands up don't shoot
Shoot your wad
Shoot for the stars
Stars in my eyes
Stars in the sky
Sky up above
Sky is falling
Falling, falling down
Falling through the cracks
Cracks in my bones
Cracks in my soul
Soul man
Soul food
Poison in the food
What makes a good man?
Another Blitz style poem, I'm having fun with this style it takes way more thought than I had initially assumed it would.

As always comments and critiques are welcomed.
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AshleysArtsyCorner's avatar
Like this, but i feel this would be to repetitive if i used it lol.