literature

February 10th 2016 (Winter Still)

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Waiting for the horizon to burst
Into a golden rose riot
That flares across icy land
Banishing the night's hold
But bringing no warmth
In winter's depths
It still holds
Despite
Dawn
For my poem a day project.

As always comments and critiques are welcomed.
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HisDarkQueen's avatar
the first 3 sentences are especially amazing!  such a wonderful way to describe the rising of the sun!  and in my head the first part is filled with warm colors that gradually change back to colder hues as I continue to read.  :D  well done!