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Sweetest World

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It’s a sweet life I’m told
We give it all
To hold us up
Now hold me up into the sun and watch me burn
I come undone
And come apart when all is lost
Madness
Madness that I believe in

A mad world is what we know
That won’t give up the beauty that we know
A mad world is all we know
But still we give it all

Nothing to hold me up
I try to give and all I get is hurt
But its okay
I’ll feel faded today
Spirits I know
I can find some peace
In this world
Through this world

A mad world is what we know
That won’t give up the beauty that we know
A mad world is all we know
But still we give it all

Sweetness and buildup
In my own hair shirt
It’s a sweet life I know
Here in the afterglow
Spirits I know
I can find some peace
In this world
Through this world

A mad world is what we know
That won’t give up the beauty that we know
A mad world is all we know
But still we give it all

Sweetness that burns when I hold
We appall
It’s all set up
And we all fall down when we learn
I come undone
And come apart when all is lost
Madness
Madness that I believe in

See our pain see our beauty all around
See it try so hard to hold us down
Now hold me up into the sun, watch me burn and watch me heal
I Need someone to know that I feel faded today
As always comments and critiques are welcome.
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PoetBrony's avatar
Dang that's deep...
Once I realized it was done as lyrics, I added a melody in my head to follow the flow. The "voice" was doubled, and had a haunted, drifting, and hopeful tone to it. The music instrumental I think.

Well, done. :+fav: